Hi Oliver, I like the second one from the bottom: how the bodies of the two girls create curves and shapes. I also like their expressions: very relaxed and satisfied after the effort of the race. The raws also create a triangle shape and it kind of leads you toward their faces. The fourth one from the bottom as well is very pleasant: I love the movement of the water and the linearity of the bodies. I really enjoy seeing their arms in tension: it makes the picture very powerful. I would have probably tried not to cut off the end of the canoe but it must have been very fast I guess!
The last photo is the best for me - I liked your composition and the amount of water you have included in the shot. I also like that the building is so far away that you have to look closely to see the detail of all the people. I thought that the second to last pic could do with either being zoomed out or zoomed right in - either the whole boat and more water or a great shot of their faces and upper torsos so emphasize the embrace. All of the pictures are so bright and colourful, great action shots!
Hi Oliver, I like the second one from the bottom: how the bodies of the two girls create curves and shapes. I also like their expressions: very relaxed and satisfied after the effort of the race. The raws also create a triangle shape and it kind of leads you toward their faces.
ReplyDeleteThe fourth one from the bottom as well is very pleasant: I love the movement of the water and the linearity of the bodies. I really enjoy seeing their arms in tension: it makes the picture very powerful. I would have probably tried not to cut off the end of the canoe but it must have been very fast I guess!
The last photo is the best for me - I liked your composition and the amount of water you have included in the shot. I also like that the building is so far away that you have to look closely to see the detail of all the people.
ReplyDeleteI thought that the second to last pic could do with either being zoomed out or zoomed right in - either the whole boat and more water or a great shot of their faces and upper torsos so emphasize the embrace.
All of the pictures are so bright and colourful, great action shots!